Ella Minnow Pea Book Review

Ella Minnow Pea by Mark Dunn Book Review

Ella Minnow Pea: A Novel in Letters is a story told in epistolary format where a small island town off the coast of South Carolina is going through some unusual communication problems. In this light fantasy, a community’s love for words is at stake, all because of some faulty glue. Anchor | September, 2002 | Paperback | 208 pp

The tiny island nation of Nollop, independent from the United States, had deified Nevin Nollop, the creator of the pangram The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog. You might be familiar with this sentence since it appears next to any new font you might considering downloading. A pangram is a full sentence that uses all letters in the alphabet and they are not easy to create. Since the nation of Nollop had exalted the English language as the highest art form, this sentence is worshiped. Like the giant sign that overlooks Hollywood, Nollop had placed this pangram over the main town of Nollopton. Everything was fine and swell for nearly a century until one of the letters, the letter z, fell.

When it was suggested that they should just put the letter back, the Council objected and then entered a closed-door session to deliberate. It was then announced:

“There was, without a doubt, purpose to the tumble; this event constituting, in my belief, a terrestrial manifestation of Mr. Nollop’s wishes. Mr. Nevin Nollop speaks to us from beyond the grave, my fellow Nollopians.”

And the letter Z was excised from their vocabulary.

The Council enacts harsh punishments for any offenders who speak or write words with the letter z. First offense is a warning. Second offense is a day in the stocks or a public lashing. And the third offense is permanent banishment under the threat of execution for any banished souls who dare to return.

It shouldn’t be too difficult to avoid using the letter z, but it’s all too troubling for Ella Minnow Pea and her family. They don’t believe that Nevin Nollop had returned from the grave to relieve them of the letter. Like most with common sense, they think the letter simply fell and should be replaced. But many more are convinced that it is work of the divine, and suddenly people are quick to turn each other in for the smallest offense. The beekeeper is the first to go since the bees under his control won’t stop buzzing with the offensive letter.

But then another letter falls, and another, and another. Each time, the Council proclaims it to be another divine influence, and these letters must be struck from the vocabulary. The written letters between Ella’s family and her cousin’s family becomes increasingly difficult to write. They don’t want to chance putting in an illegal letter since all communications are being heavily monitored and censored – and not only would the writer be in trouble, but also the person in receipt of the letter.

As the first few letters fall, the written letters become more creative while our adept letter-writers find creative and complicated alternatives for words that contain the offending letters. They retain their good humor and hope that the Council will see reason and eventually reverse the current course. But things go from strange to horrendous quickly. More letters fall, neighbor turns on neighbor with accusations of heresy, and the Council is casting out more and more people – and then taking over their homes and other property in obvious moves of greed shrouded in a strange form of theocracy.

Suddenly, some of the most ardent accusers find themselves alone, with the rest of their family gone. Few people are left and Ella is one of them. There are so few letters left on the giant sign and to save their island nation, she must find another pangram to prove to the Council that Nollop was NOT a god.

Ella Minnow Pea is a short book and hurrah for that. Although I enjoyed the story line and the premise of a language-loving island nation with the threat of missing letters and an overly religious council, the novelty wears off quickly, especially when the language begins to deteriorate. Toward the end, the written letters are a mishmosh of phonetically sounding syllables to replace actual words. It’s quite laborious to interpret.

“Ella,

Pharewell. Pharewell. Tho we were not phrents 4 long, I will so miss ewe. Ewe are strong. It is goot that ewe are lepht. We wish ewe well with Enterprise 32. We wish ewe well with ephereething ewe trie to asheeph in these trieing phinel taes. To asheeph 4 Nollop. 4 all we espatriot Nollopians. The Nollopian tiaspora!

Aphetionatelee,
Tanea ant phamilee”

See what I mean?

The author must have had quite the time to create these missives later on in the book, making sure to avoid each fallen letter at the correct stage. It must have been a painful task. The book is short for lack of letters and for lack of actual words – and ways for words to be interpreted.

I loved the premise – this existential threat to a society built on the love of words. If it weren’t for the Council, I would love to live on this fictional island! But keeping the novel in epistolary format where we are forced to endure the loss of letters along with the characters is a little too gimmicky.



Ella Minnow Pea: A Novel in Letters
by Mark Dunn

Ella Minnow Pea: A Novel in Letters




Rebecca Skane

Rebecca Skane is the editor-in-chief for the Portsmouth Review. She holds a Bachelor of the Arts degree from Lawrence University in Wisconsin and resides in Portsmouth, NH with her husband and two children. She is the founder of The Portsmouth Book Club which boasts over 1,000 members. She also doubles as a professional escapist. Her genres are scifi and fantasy, both adult and young adult - but she often reads outside of her preferred genres. You can follow her on GoodReads. Aside from her love of good books, she is a professional website developer, content editor, and SEO expert. You can visit her web design and development site at RebeccaSkane.com.


  • I’d have a hard time with the end as well — it sounds more like an interesting writing exercise rather than something that’s an effective book itself. Original idea, though! Great review!

    • It was very original and I agree, it was like a writing exercise. Perhaps it was and then turned into a book.

  • orangutanlibrarian

    Ah shame it was a bit gimmicky. I do like the idea, but it sounds like the style got in the way of the enjoyment. Great review though!

    • It was like reading a puzzle. Fun at first, but frustrating toward the end. Ah well!

  • Emily @ Paperback Princess

    This seems like a really cool book! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Unique books are the best.

  • The Candid Cover YA book blogg

    What an intriguing concept! I have not read anything like this before and it sounds like a one-of-a-kind type of book. I will definitely add this to my list of books to check out. 🙂

  • I mist admit, I adore the sound of how silly and utterly charming it is. The premise is brilliant. It’s just the letters written to characters and not entire narrative that reads that way though? That would start to irritate after a while. Wonderful review Rebecca even though it didn’t entirely work for you.

    • Just the letters. I feel like it would have been so much more interesting to have a regular novel with some letters to show how they were dealing with the loss, but I think he wanted the gimmick to be the story.

  • I read another novel in just letters a while ago (I can’t remember what it was called) and I didn’t expect to enjoy it but I really did! Great review 🙂

    • I don’t think I’ve ever read one in pure letters – this might’ve been a first for me. Thanks!

  • It does sound like a fun tongue in cheek kind of book though. Since it is short, I don’t think it would bother me too much. I do like the premise. Brilly review.

  • Ella Minnow Pea… I see what they did there :DD

    This sounds like an incredibly adorable read. Illegal letters! It sounds like I absolutely have to read this. Even despite the legibility problems by the end 😀 must’ve been hard to write, but it proves a point.

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